That car park kiss

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‘That car park kiss began an ill fated tryst

that ended with a twist of a poisoned blade.

The bliss of that kiss and the offer of breast

would have tasted less sweet if I’d only got pissed

and flown the nest.

But I surfed on the crest of an unstoppable wave,

becoming obsessed with your honey coloured flesh.

Despite all the risks and the mental gash

that needed constantly licked I pressed on and on,

as you slowly knowingly conjured more tricks.

Turning the screw and our love into a one-sided contest’.


That car park kiss – From Water’s Edge by Dave Young and Juliet Adele


3 thoughts on “That car park kiss

    willowdot21 said:
    August 28, 2013 at 1:28 pm

    Brilliant, having the knowledge of danger but not the heart to avoid it….. the things we do for love!


      daveyoungpoet responded:
      August 29, 2013 at 10:16 am

      Thank you for your comment – love as an unstoppable wave is a potent mix of risk, desire and guilt.


        willowdot21 said:
        August 29, 2013 at 3:48 pm

        Yes and we just watch wide eyes like trapped rabbits as it washes over us!


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